Should children attend nursery school prior to primary school? Is it a positive or a negative development?
Answer :
At the age of three, children start attending nursery followed by primary school in many countries. Whether this norm is advantageous or disadvantageous is a topic for debate. In my opinion,this has upper hand as children’s not only become socially active but it also provides the base for future studies.
To commence with, Montessori is the place where a child starts his/her social life .He/she is left alone with the students of same age group. It is perhaps, the best place for children to enhance their interactive skills, which is a crucial milestone to attend for their social development. Teachers’ engage pupils in various activities and games that aids them to communicate with each other, creates a sense of belongingness as well as make them think independently. Although parents can teach their offsprings at home,they lack in skills and also have insufficient time to devoid to their child. Hence,it is clear that admitting children to preschool is a wise decision .
Furthermore ,in primary school it is expected that students should be able to read , write alphabets and numbers and also have basic knowledge of identifying common fruits, colors, animals.Therefore, kindergarden becomes the foundation of the education because here children are taught alphabets and numbers . If a child is enrolled directly into primary standard, he/she may find it difficult to cope up with their studies.For example,in India first standard syllabus includes reading and writing words and by attending preschool they are ready to start proper schooling . This shows that preschools are essential to have a good education background.
In conclusion,I believe nursery is the important steping stone in building a strong base of a child’s academic life and in his /her overall growth which makes it a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40138408304 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1155589953 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650519031142 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9159811953 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191724283956 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647047434715 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866346778911 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114648244602 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630710180336 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.