For some people shopping is not just about buying what is necessary, but a form of entertainment. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Nowdays people spend more and more time is the shops. people buy the goods, both for entertainment and for necessart porpuses. if consumers take shoping as a entertainment it can have negative impact for envaiorment as well over consumption can happen. Furthermore we could spend that money and time for lesure activities. if taking those factors consideration I fermly belive that this is a negative development.
Overconsumption and massproduction are big threaths to the world ecosystem. Factories will spend huges ammounts of resorces. Every activitie will leave the ecological footprint. By buying products wich are not necessary we fuel that system. if we do not change our ways the global worming and other climate changes can speed up. we can have a closer look how china is main mass producer in the world. For example, if we grab random plastic object near us I am pretty sure it is made in china. And if we do same in dump yard, I am certain that the answer is same. that example ilustrates perfectly why it is not smart to produce low quality and pointless goods wich will end up in garbidge after opening packige.
Instead waisting our money and precusse time in shops we could use them for other porpuses. More than ever comercal sabotage us to spent money and time to buy things we acualy do not need. Many people spend all weekend in shop. it can lead to adicction where we spend moest of our money and time. if we could brake taht cycle, we would have more money and time for that vecation or car we dremed of. A good illustration is my good friend vivian. she had higher income than me but, vivian could not join me to vecations. after I explained how i only buy things i really need and instead work at weekends she realized thet things need to change. next year she had new car and we went to Bali together.
To conclude how mass production damages earth aswell people wellbeing we can agree thet things need to change. it is often said that big things will satart form small changes. By consuming less we support our ecosystem and saving money and time. if we do that next car or vecation can be closer than you think.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, really, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60313315927 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52161473238 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553524804178 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9268253812 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.2962962963 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1851851852 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126030504316 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381422058329 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435748201241 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885351445424 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372377886136 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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