You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Terrence,
How many year we haven’t written to each other? Its great to connect with you. I hope you and your family are all in good health.
So you are not sure what step to take next. Don’t worry I know what`s best form you. As we are gone trough school since we were young I noticed that you really do not enjoy reading and writing. better be mind of that because in college you have go trough to lot of material. Much better solution would be to get a job instead, because you need to save some money for that rock concert where we will go next summer. therefore I did recommend you to my friend from music shop. he is keen to meet you therefore the spot at the drum section is booked form you. he already knows about your drum and base addiction.
Warm Wishes Dennis
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 5, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'many years'.
Suggestion: many years
Dear Terrence, How many year we haven’t written to each other? Its g...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Better
...eally do not enjoy reading and writing. better be mind of that because in college you ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...k concert where we will go next summer. therefore I did recommend you to my friend from m...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...k concert where we will go next summer. therefore I did recommend you to my friend from m...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...mmend you to my friend from music shop. he is keen to meet you therefore the spot ...
^^
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...at the drum section is booked form you. he already knows about your drum and base ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 641.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27333333333 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06517150216 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2395547254 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.4166666667 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232137972061 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075277075662 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472769974294 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155451855072 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082435958752 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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