At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
many countries will go through phases where a balance between young and old residents are out of balance. if the country's population is aging, I firmly believe that this is a starting point of a big problem. Therefore if countries have more younger people than older I am certain that it will outweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly, well functional society needs young and healthy individuals to fill different areas of the economy. For example different positions in the farming industry. At the time when I wast in the best years of my life, I did the candidate for a forklift driving position in the farming industry. The first thing what they asked was my age. Why is age so important? because staff members had to work long shift hours and at the same time remain razor-sharp until to next shift. Persons who were over 40 years old couldn't fit for night shifts because of different hazards which will come with aging, like longer reaction time.
Secondly, a country with a young population has fewer problems with finances. if most of the people in the country are retired then who will make money for them to pay out pensions. A good illustration of this is the current situation in japan. over half of a population is suitable for retirement. Nevertheless, most of them are still working. Moreover, japan with a high level of pensionary workers is among the highest in the world. The country won’t have enough money to pay out pensions for old people. There is not enough younger workers who would pay taxes and support retired citizens.
Taking everything into consideration, it is clearly understood that countries with a larger number of young people are more beneficial to the economy. Every healthy and functional society need’s young and sharp minds to fill different working positions. Without the young generation, many countries are struggling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01916932907 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71520387158 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575079872204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5194125904 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8095238095 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9047619048 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204912572301 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550273375669 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502082082323 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121133453337 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317089078085 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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