Many people associate money with happiness and think that more money one has,the happier they should be.do you agree or disagree?
Money has been linked to happiness by many people and they believe in the thought of more the merrier. I completely disagree with this notion , as happiness is the mental state which is associated with many factors ,money being one of them and not the soul reason for everyone’s happiness.
Happiness is a sense of joy felt by us after achieving our desires. It can be described as a state of complete satisfaction. For an artist it can be felt when his/her work is appreciated and recognised ,, similarly for teenagers it can be after securing good grades. Thus ,talent ,good grades and mental peace can not be bought by money. To exemplify, lord Buddha was born with a silver spoon in his mouth and was suppose to rule the kingdom ,however he found his inner peace in serving humanity.
Moreover ,many billionaires and top celebrities have fallen prey to depression or commited suicide. One such example is of bollywood actress Deepika Padukone ,who was diagnosed with depression few years back. Despite being a highest paid actress and having a successful career she was not happy. If money would have been the source of happiness ,we would have not heard this real life stories. Although there are many people who support this view of money being the treasure house of happiness ,it does not hold true for everyone.
In conclusion, mental state contributes to greater extend for being happy and cheerful in life rather than money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91428571429 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61016513309 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6902668207 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6153846154 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295944321227 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10503165374 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905016005234 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197907939195 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11961680236 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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