Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party

Hi Jhon,

Hope you’re doing good, I am writing this letter to inviting you to join my family dinner party on coming week end at sdfdd hotel on the occasion of my sister birthday.

I am planning celebrate her 15th birthday party as a memorable day to her. I want to surprise her by calling all cousins and friends, As you know because of father sick we unable to celebrate her birthday from last 2 years, hence this year every one fine and we all back to normal life want to have a family gathering on this occasion.

I planning to arrange a dinner party with live music concert from one of her favourite singer along with sdsd band. Even I am planning to have some fun games ,singing competition followed by cake cutting dinner along with drinks.

I hope you join the party as your my best friend , a good brother for my sister as well.
So she will be happy by seeing you in the party. She knows you from childhood and happy to play with you even she enjoy while you are singing , you are one of her favourite singer as well.

Please attend the party , let us have fun together with my family.
See you.

Best regards,
Mdfdf

Votes
Average: 8.6 (9 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Jhon, Hope you’re doing good, I am writing thi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a family gathering on this occasion. I planning to arrange a dinner party with...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...a family gathering on this occasion. I planning to arrange a dinner party with...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sd band. Even I am planning to have some fun games ,singing competition followed ...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en I am planning to have some fun games ,singing competition followed by cake cut...
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Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ou join the party as your my best friend , a good brother for my sister as well. ...
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Line 10, column 114, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...ood and happy to play with you even she enjoy while you are singing , you are one of ...
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Line 10, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...you even she enjoy while you are singing , you are one of her favourite singer as ...
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Line 12, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nger as well. Please attend the party , let us have fun together with my family...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43867924528 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17766825943 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.03541017 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293984708464 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105811387347 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691087248742 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143796665199 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626877863845 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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