Dear John,
I was amazed to hear that you have started a new business, it is all working up so fast. I remember the last time we meet, you told me all about your future entrepreneur plans but i didn't realize it was going to happen so fast. I am really happy for you and i think i have a great product suggestion that might be successful for you to export in near countries.
I think that olive oil production can be a really fruitful business since it is a product that people consume daily. Furthermore we have unlimited amounts of land located from the center of Albania all the way to the south in Saranda. I would suggest you can create partnerships with farmers from Lushnja, they have been around in this type of business for decades and knows everything about it.
You can differentiate from the competition from producing virgin olive oil made from premium quality. There are high demands in countries like Kosovo, Macedonia and Montenegro so at beggining you can start with them. At the moment you can find it difficult to export olive oil in Italy and Greece because they are well known for their quality olive oil all around the world. But this doesn't mean you can't compete with them in the future.
Consider having a cafe one of these weeks as i seriously believe to invest in your company for a small percentage.
See you soon,
Yours faithfully
Greg
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...realize it was going to happen so fast. I am really happy for you and i think i h...
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...or you to export in near countries. I think that olive oil production can be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62857142857 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47198716281 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604081632653 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.240164849 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301590030893 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110290823635 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548971117394 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162217383422 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361059746347 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.