You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have an acquaintance who lives there.Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter•explain your situation•say why you feel unsure about li

Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to inform you that i have been offered a job in London. I will be the senior software developer in the new department created at Xerox company.

I am interested in this job because the payment is really high, the job opportunity will enhance my career and the benefits and allowances are difficult to turn down. You know that i have never been to London and i am skeptical about relocating to that city.

Since you have been living to London for some months, i believe that you can help me with some information that will help me decide whether or not to accept this job offer. To begin with i want to know about the security level, standard of living and the social life in London. All these factor will help me to decide whether or not to accept this offer.

I will be glad if you can answer my questions and reply to this letter.

All the best,
David

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at i have been offered a job in London. I will be the senior software developer i...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...epartment created at Xerox company. I am interested in this job because the p...
^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ow that i have never been to London and i am skeptical about relocating to that c...
^
Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... been living to London for some months, i believe that you can help me with some ...
^
Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...me information that will help me decide whether or not to accept this job offer. To begin with...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to accept this job offer. To begin with i want to know about the security level, ...
^
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...All these factor will help me to decide whether or not to accept this offer. I will be glad...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, you know, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38285714286 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25063075059 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4090080952 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319706707061 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132358796136 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111651968511 0.0603063233224 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212435449386 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439223650544 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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