You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.2. Explain why you must change your plans.3. Suggest alter

Dear Sam.

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform you that i am not able to see you next week in London. Even though i was very excited to see you and your family after a long time.

As for our plans to explore the beauty of London this holiday i am sorry to say that i have to postpone this plan. So i want to apologize to you for the unexpected changes of planes. My head office will organize a three day conference which is compulsory to be attended from everyone. I am sorry about this and i am sure that you will understand my reasons.

If it suits you i would suggest to postpone the trip toward the end of the year and to a new location as it would be all snow in Europe. Probably, we can think about going to Thailand to ring in the new year. Again i am sorry for this sudden change of plans and i am really looking forward to a year end trip with you.

Best regards.
Ben

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... writing this letter to inform you that i am not able to see you next week in Lon...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ee you next week in London. Even though i was very excited to see you and your fa...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and your family after a long time. As for our plans to explore the beauty of ...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...plore the beauty of London this holiday i am sorry to say that i have to postpone...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y that i have to postpone this plan. So i want to apologize to you for the unexpe...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rom everyone. I am sorry about this and i am sure that you will understand my rea...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...derstand my reasons. If it suits you i would suggest to postpone the trip towa...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest postponing'.
Suggestion: suggest postponing
... my reasons. If it suits you i would suggest to postpone the trip toward the end of the year and...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Thailand to ring in the new year. Again i am sorry for this sudden change of plan...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rry for this sudden change of plans and i am really looking forward to a year end...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04945054945 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14843596136 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587912087912 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8704222028 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231136898879 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786176703022 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619512467097 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15972784891 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661806406909 0.0580467560999 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.21 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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