Dear Jane,
How are you? We last spoke when I was job hunting and that was 3 years ago. I'm extremely happy to let you know that I secured my dream job and have recently been promoted to head of my department. This role allows me to travel frequently and next month I will be flying to Singapore.
Let me explain in detail. Although, the purpose of my visit is to attend a seminar for 3 days, I've decided to extend my stay by a week . As such, leaving me with ample time to explore the city as well as to spend some time catching up with you. Moreover, I'm excited to meet the addition to the family, baby Lia.
Lastly, people have been raving about the Singapore's food and culture and I'm looking forward to indulging myself in some. Wouldn't it be lovely to sip some wine and reminisce about our younger days? Please let me know your availability.
Can't wait to meet you.
Your friend
Mary
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
...s job hunting and that was 3 years ago. Im extremely happy to let you know that I ...
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Suggestion: I've
...isit is to attend a seminar for 3 days, Ive decided to extend my stay by a week . A...
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Suggestion: .
... Ive decided to extend my stay by a week . As such, leaving me with ample time to ...
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Suggestion: I'm
...me time catching up with you. Moreover, Im excited to meet the addition to the fam...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...out the Singapores food and culture and Im looking forward to indulge myself in so...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to indulging'.
Suggestion: to indulging
...food and culture and Im looking forward to indulge myself in some. Wouldnt it be lovely to...
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Suggestion: Wouldn't
...king forward to indulge myself in some. Wouldnt it be lovely to sip some wine and remin...
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...d to indulge myself in some. Wouldnt it be lovely to sip some wine and reminisce a...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...lease let me know your availability. Cant wait to meet you. Your friend Mary ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, look, moreover, so, well, as to, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38095238095 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26150099517 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690476190476 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5017159371 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.6153846154 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9230769231 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185187286328 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679576251849 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526676880808 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1025093519 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314449694719 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.