Write a /letter to your landlord about the problem with a water leak in your house. Please say– What is the problem?– What is the source of the problem, in your opinion?– What do you think needs to be done?

Dear Landlord,

Trust you're well. I am writing this letter to acknowledge you about the water leaking issue which is happening since a while. Previously, I have addressed the problem via making a phone call to your son, However there was no action has been taken yet.

According to my observation, the latest tabs and pumps are creating problem after repair of the flat. I believe, these are purchased form the local market on cheaper rate by the plumbers hired for this year repairing. Therefore, leakage is started soon after the renewal. Moreover, the old tabs and other water resources which has not been replaced are working perfectly super.

In conclusion, would you mind replacing the newer tabs with some solid product? I would highly recommend you to hire the XYZ organisation, A plumbing company with 20 years of experience in this business to fix the current issue. So that we can live with sense of peace in your apartment. Because water leakage is really a mess at the moment.

I believe, You will address this issue on your first priority list.

Many Thanks,
Shahin

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Landlord, Trust youre well. I am writing this letter to ackno...
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Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...this business to fix the current issue. So that we can live with sense of peace in your...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with sense of peace in your apartment. Because water leakage is really a mess at the m...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92972972973 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50013878358 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5365991428 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1538461538 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216071351602 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659662884572 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550550210493 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124482728234 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701142860099 0.0580467560999 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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