Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
Ans:- Dear Sir,
My name is Samvedna Puri, currently designated as Assistant Manager in sales department. I am feeling anticiated while inscribing this epistle to acquire your permission for conducting a presentation through projector. As you are well aware regarding the seminar that i attented last week at head office which was typically based on sale promotional activities.
Even though existing staff is already euipped with required skills for smooth functioning but acquainting them with diverse marketing promotion techniques and mixed sale strategies are the need of hour. Thus, bestowing necessary skills and practical knowledge is an impeccable option. Furthermore, the whole presentation will take two hours and 30 minutes more for cross questioning if anyone would have queries.
Since, the purpose of event was to emphasis on enhancing the sale of the organisations therefore person who are currently employeed under associated department should attend. The conference hall is not occupied on upcoming monday hence it could be easy to arrange the meet over there.
I hope a prompt and positive response from your end.
Your faithfully,
Samvedna Puri.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cting a presentation through projector. As you are well aware regarding the semina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64245810056 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93192320031 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.793296089385 0.622605031667 127% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2244857769 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162948686003 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562099432635 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059635325211 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755912580182 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342546137087 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 8.71597938144 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 7.59969072165 134% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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