There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.
Undoubtedly, having no child lifesyle is being preferred by committed partners which eventually associated with some pros and cons. This essay asserts that although the escalating scale is bestwoing people with ample career opportunities, the exaggerating economical burden on the nations can not be overlooked.
Since, preceptions of the individuals of this ever-progressing era contrast with the conventional way of thinking therefore, denizens are more goal oriented in current scenario and driving theirselves unexpectedly to achieve them. Seemingly, evading from parental responsibilities is the only plausible way which enable people to snatch enough time to divert endless efforts in the predeterminded directions. To exemplify, as per the research of Tribune, around 40% females across the globe are forced to give up their jobs to take care the child undeniably this practice becomes stumbling block in the path of career aspirations.
Even though this phenomenon endows people more liberalisation, it is also accountable for continously addition of financial pressure on the supermacy. Reason to this is that when these person enter the older phase of life get inflicted by isolation which further make them prone to health related ailments. In order to cater, authorities have to incurr hefty amount of money to establish daycare centres and supply the nursing services that constitute the extra strain on financial budget. For instance, in Canada more than half of the population is grey which is unable to contribute productively which leads to stagnation of the economy.
To conclude, this emerging trend is going to exaggerate in upcoming unforeseenable future but government of every terrain should enact some stringent laws to get rid from this menace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the escalating scale is bestwoing people with ample career opportunities, the exa...
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
... supermacy. Reason to this is that when these person enter the older phase of life get infli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59409594096 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10910956296 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686346863469 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.8556527311 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.6 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880879448729 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316992828959 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0186166825964 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510255931841 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014654479443 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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