Today people are travelling more than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Undoubtedly, in the contemporary epoch there is an emerging trend of excursion among people. Even though reduction in the travelling cost is one of pivotal causes to proliferate the travelling across the globe, still invasive surge in travelling has alleviated the culture disparity which leads to the global harmony and less conflicts.
Since the stiff competition in tourism industry has paved the path of affordable travelling, thus commoners have started to travel frequently. Seemingly, reduction in the ticket cost of airlines, economical hotel stay and cost effective tour packages have gravitated the influx of tourists to famous tourist sites. Also it is biased to overlook the fact documented by American Aviation Council that low cost airlines doubled the number of domestic voyagers during 2019 in the U.S.A. Therefore, trimmed travelling cost mitigates the financial woes of voyagers and allows them to travel more.
Probing to the next question, spurt in tourism has reduced the cultural diversity among people. When excursionists visit a place, they explore about the customs, tradition, lifestyle to the host country and they imitate what appeal to them. Similarly, the commoners who dwell around the tourist destinations are influenced by the behavior of travelers and imbibe their habits. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted by New York Times, in the gone calendar year, western culture has swallowed the culture of tourism favoring countries such as Indonesian and became the dominant culture. Hence, burgeoning travelling has endowed the opportunity to people to get acquaint with other cultures which is essential in maintaining global peace and resolving all the global issues.
In conclusion, although the cut in cost of travelling has allured innumerable people to travel frequently, it has eradicated the culture difference which leads to the tranquility in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52218430034 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85548273324 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0904590441 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.090909091 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239835193137 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845036521886 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817755011995 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161702084348 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442633304712 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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