You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Today, traveling has become one of the popular hobbies among people. The number of people traveling to different places for personal, professional, and recreational purposes has increased enormously. This essay will intend to analyze the reason for this change and the ways the travelers are benefitted.
To commence with, cheap airfare and fast transportation have encouraged people to travel to different places than ever before. The number of people traveling to various cities or countries to attend business meetings, visit relatives and enjoy holidays has increased tremendously in recent years. Gone are the days where people stay in the same city, and a tour was a word for rich people only. Besides, the tourism industry in most of the countries is working hard to attract more foreign people, and taking initiatives and advertisement strategies to reach global vacationist. It is evident, that the busier days and hectic lifestyle will easily drain one out. Nowadays, people want to refresh themselves quite often due to the increasing workload, and they have easy access to explore any place they want to visit. On top of that, technological advancements have developed magnificently and enabled people to learn about new places around the globe from their handpicked devices. Booking hotels, paying for tickets, and managing a tour is just a mouse click away.
A traveler both enjoys the experience of traveling and learn about new cultures and traditions. This enhances his/her views, increase tolerance about other cultures, and helps to develop their knowledge. Traveling helps to get away from a monotonous routine and revive to concentrate our works.
To recapitulate, most people travel to different places due to various reasons, and improved transportation facilities, technological advancements, and new initiatives taken by the tourism industry all fueled this trend. Traveling broadens our perspectives, creates opportunities, and refreshes our minds. Traveling helps to rediscover ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ased tremendously in recent years. Gone are the days where people stay in the same ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57467532468 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99057347086 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4611130833 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82352941176 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283789191701 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928726516566 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597368062276 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191562512109 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058186148996 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.