There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this

Essay topics:

There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

Every year lots of people around the world marry each other. Having kids are their own personal decision after marriage. Some people opt to have some kids. However, other decide not to have any in their life.As of today world, there is upward trend of people who decide to have no baby. These scenario has its own pros and cons.

To commence with, there are number of benefits to not to have any kids. Firstly couples would not have to worry about their financial situtaion both in present time as well as for future. They do not have to think about the education expense of their child and even not about general expense of a baby. Secondly, they can fulfill their personal desire whenever they want to compare to the parents couple who sometimes have to make sacrifice their needs and wants for their kids. For example:- sometime a mother or father choose to be in dead marriage relationship just because of their children.

On the other side, having babies have their own advantages. Among all of them, the prominent one is you will never get bored in your life, whenever you will feel sad you can play with them and by seeing their faces all your stress will drain out from your mind. In addition, when you became old and if you have your own children they can do take care of you. They can take you to the hospitals and can spend time with you when you need the most. even if partner died you will not feel lonely because at that time someone from them will be around you.

In conclusion, children are kind a gift from god who can be at you back anytime you need. having them or not is sole decision of married couple no one can force their opinion on them. But I believe they should have one or two in their life.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: As
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...d of people who decide to have no baby. These scenario has its own pros and cons. To commen...
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...inancial situtaion both in present time as well as for future. They do not have to think a...
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...ionship just because of their children. On the other side, having babies have th...
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...life, whenever you will feel sad you can play with them and by seeing their faces...
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...ho can be at you back anytime you need. having them or not is sole decision of married...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.415625 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00329562456 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8332973051 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186564408443 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681748036778 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615009920844 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129879475724 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611659230918 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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