You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course.
Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter,
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Dean,
My name is Samvedna Puri, student of short term 'Personality Development' course at your institution. I am inscribing this epistle to apprise you regarding my unableness to attend the classes in evening batch. This is because, i am also recruited as fully time employee in an organisation and work commitments are not allowing to continue the class.
Since, it has been 10 months working as Audit Inspector in Cooperative Department and as per the head office policy every employee has to under go a training sessions after completion of above said period. Therefore, i am also being transferred to another city for 30 days to be the part of programme as this opportunity is very imperative for my job career which can not be avoided at any cost.
It would be highly appreciable if you could inform me with the schedules of upcoming batches and timings. Moreover, i would feel grateful if the already paid fee could
be adjusted in next in take.
I anticipate a prompt and positive response from your side as per your earlier convenience.
Your Faithfully,
Samvedna Puri.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sses in evening batch. This is because, i am also recruited as fully time employe...
^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'continuing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: continuing
...n and work commitments are not allowing to continue the class. Since, it has been 10 mon...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: undergo
...ead office policy every employee has to under go a training sessions after completion of...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...letion of above said period. Therefore, i am also being transferred to another ci...
^
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...upcoming batches and timings. Moreover, i would feel grateful if the already paid...
^
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l grateful if the already paid fee could be adjusted in next in take. I antici...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88525028154 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6135684348 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193575169377 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701252071649 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439843805094 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079385010337 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070433169352 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.