In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time
with their friends.
Why has this change occurred?
Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time
with their friends.
?
Undoubtedly, there is an escalated trend of spending more time with friends than family. One of the pivotal causes of this vogue is extreme materialism among parents which turning them workaholic ,thus they have quite trivial amount of time to spend with their offspring. However, I cogitate that parents should allow their young ones to spend time with peers which would conductive in imparting the social values.
Since the insane thirst for materialistic possessions is forcing the human to work around the clock, thus they are not able to spend quality time with their young ones. Seemingly, privation of love and affection compel the children to wander with their friend in order to get rid of isolation. Also , it is biased to overlook the fact documented by Canadian Youth Care Council that 90 percent of young adults prefer to live in the company of their mates owing to which they like to live in dormitories. Therefore, lack of attention of parents who are highly busy in earning their livelihood force the youngsters to mingle with outsiders.
Juveniles imbibe the habits of their age-mates and hence, they learn communication skills when they company with their friends. Same level of intellectual competencies and age would be more helpful among avid youngsters to adapt the virtues of others.To exemplify as per the survey carried out by New York Times, in the gone calendar year, juveniles imitate countless manners and etiquette when they spend colossal amount with their peers. Hence, company of good friends is an impeccable measure to
inculcate the ample traits and get rid of nasty habits.
In conclusion, undeniably proliferating greed of money keeps the parents away from their beloved ones which intensify their behavior to spend more time with age-mates. However, friends could instills the social values which would be imperative in order to thrive in the contemporary era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21682847896 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60756922701 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1285726406 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416504760561 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161457222247 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103557265853 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214381019291 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141035162925 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.