Many people say that only to way to guarantee a good job is to complete course of university education. other claim that it is
better to start work after school and gain experience in the world o f work Discuss both?
Some denizens tend to believe that accomplishment of certain degrees pave the path for work opportunities whereas other section of society vocalize that earning pragmatic experience after academics is way better. However, i cogitate that although real life learnings are vital but professional courses act as foundation stone for a successful career which can not be overlooked.
Even though higher education has become the inevitable part of education system, the worthy experience still can not be acquired from university. Seemingly, without exposing to the untoward circumstances of world one can never be enough competent to suffer the challengies
which is ultimately impossible to grasp from testbooks. Moreover, some individuals are profound at their skills and prefer to excercise in real surroundings in order to sharpen them rather than persuaing further studies and invariably cherish the favourable consequencies . To exemplify, Dheru Bhai Ambani was one of the rishest person of world who dropped his study and started to look for employment opportunities and became the most successful entrepreneure.
Since, job structure in current scenario has designed in a highly systematic way which demands university knowledge to secure a job therefore, academic education is compulsory. Reason behind this is that vocational trainning programms conducted by colleges bestow avid youngsters with intriguing abilitise to capture job offers in the corporate world. Moreover, theoretical know-how is also the part of courses which is conductiv for comprehensive understanding of the facts. It would be biased to bypass the data published by International Employment Exchange stating that across the globe every corporation has made mandatory to obtain Masters in Business Administration for the managerial posts, considering as minimum educational qualification.
To conclude, though work after higher secondary could addition valuable lessons for life but tertiarry education endow job aspirants
with conceptual as well as pratical wisdom which is the essence of any job profile
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83116883117 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15467755062 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668831168831 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3952906892 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.272727273 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178557891393 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602443342031 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505057753651 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083019323495 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437406426357 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.38 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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