Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially
at the primary level.
Do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, a major portion of populace vocalize that art is essential part of scholastic activities and it should be introduced at the initial level of schooling. I agree with statement that art is imperative subject because it guarantees the holistic development of children which is necessary in prevailing epoch and paves the path of luminous career.
Since the art is the expression of internal creativity of human in the form of dance, music, art and drama, thus it usually brushes up the hidden competencies. Seemingly, when pupils are exposed to art in their formative ages, then they develop their cognitive skills, enhance their concentration power and polish their innate skills. Also it is biased to overlook the fact documented by American Children Care Council that in American elementary schools the abstract thinking has grown up briskly among scholars owing to exposure of art in the tender age. Therefore, like mathematics and science, art has also widely recognized as an indispensable part of effective learning in salad age of
pupils.
To continue, even though other school subjects ensure great career opportunities, art is also rubbing its shoulders with them and confirming high employ ability along with lucrative compensation. Being as an important subject, it imparts learners a true knowledge and their subconscious mind is also in good state to grab all these coaching. Consequently, with consistent and persistent efforts soon they grow up as exceptionally talented artists which allure the countless opportunities in their lives. To exemplify,
as per the survey conducted by The Times of India, in the gone calendar year, talent hunt shows on TV has really endowed the wonderful platforms to exhibit the traits of young children and these are quite conductive in making their career.
In conclusion, although it quite arduous to achieve success in arts, the level of name and fame what artists can earn from arts cannot be expected from other subjects. Hence, in order to achieve overall growth and bright career , art is mandatory in the elementary school level.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30447761194 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87298281546 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632835820896 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.2225950049 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.083333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18765746138 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656137551525 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430819299956 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923746861645 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487751008548 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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