More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?
Even though majority of population vocalize that mass exodus of exceptionally talented people from emerging countries to developed countries is just like stealing the great human potential , while a few portion of populace think that it is common phenomenon. However I agree with statement that eminent nations are gravitating the young job aspirants through committing about the greener pasture and reduction in qualified man power compel them to do this necessary evil.
Since the rich world guarantee the better life style, high employability, job satisfaction and social securities to extremely talented folks, thus the people aspire for luminous future allure to the claims of these nation. Seemingly, privileged nations foster their big corporate house to start their subsidiaries in the developing nations and pool highly skilled force which eventually migrate to their country. Also , it is biased to overlook the facts published by American Human Resource Council that Google grants offer letter to work in the U.S.A to their proficient employees who work in the underprivileged nations.
To continue, burgeoning in the ratio of grey people has put the several countries in dilemma as they are suffering from the scarcity of work force. Consequently, advanced countries is increasing the stay ratio by converting the study visas into work permits, offering residency programs and granting a lot visas to students. To exemplify, as per the survey in the gone calendar year by Canadian Revenue Agency, the Canada is welcoming the skilled labor form diverse part of world to work their so that they can contribute
towards the upliftment of Canadian economy.
In conclusion, although people are relocating since their inception, the industrialized nation has intensify this process by offering them several advantageous. Moreover, increase in life expectancy has blessed the human with long ages which eventually spurt the paucity of young skilled force hence the advanced nations have to indulge in brain drain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50320512821 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8432214246 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.289788224 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.7 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132159939239 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533573331955 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648314902931 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533826093486 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510992849254 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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