You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course.
Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter,
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear sir,
My name is Samvedna Puri, student of short term 'Personality Development' course at your prestigious institution. I am inscribing this epistle to apprise you regarding my incompetency to attend the classes in evening batch. Gladly, i have been employing as a full time worker at "Texas International" since past 4 months and by ill luck my work commitments are creating inconvenience for me to continue the classes.
Since, i have been going through the initial working phase in the organisation, therefore as per the head office policy i have to undergo a training session to get acquainted with the culture and traits of the company. Consequently, i will be transferred to London for a period of two months to be the part this of program as this workshop is very imperative for my further career and is unavoidable.
Moreover, it would be highly appreciable if you could inform me about the schedule of upcoming batch and timings as I strongly anticipate to rejoin my prevailing course. Also, I would feel grateful if the already paid fee could be adjusted in next intake.
I anticipate a prompt and positive response from your side as per your earlier convenience.
Your Faithfully,
Samvedna Puri.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...tch. Gladly, i have been employing as a full time worker at 'Texas International&apo...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd traits of the company. Consequently, i will be transferred to London for a per...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08374384236 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16924542699 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660098522167 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0767903749 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202123757412 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724838952738 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396398557514 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10263462917 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570086421444 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.