You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now
find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin
Dear Mr John,
I am attending a crash course on learning Guitar at your Angles Institute, Santa Clara. I am writing this letter to inform you that I may need to discontinue the training.
Currently, I am working as a Senior Member Technical at Oracle Labs, San Hose and the nature of my job is day shift, full time. I have enrolled in the 'GPE2' music course, focused on teaching Acoustic Guitar during week-day evenings. Furthermore, I have paid my entire tuition fee of $600 using my Axis Credit card. I am regularly attending the classes and have completed the first stage in my learning module.
However, Recently, my Organization has changed my work timings to the afternoon shift, which will be from 2 PM to 10 PM, effective next week. As I have to be at my office during these hours, I may not further continue my music certification.
Having completed only a month in my course, I request you to refund the advance paid and the amount for the un-attended period. You can deposit the amount on the same credit card or to my bank account.
I await your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Srini Kolam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... and the nature of my job is day shift, full time. I have enrolled in the GPE2 music cour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64974619289 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68671336673 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649746192893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2694178889 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201283765569 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749560185987 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537765747404 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110798081644 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605916942495 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.