You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs
some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In you letter
explain what you like about the cafeteria
say what is wrong with it
suggest how it could be improved
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .................
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am studying final year in Electrical Engineering Department at Wesley College, and I am writing this letter concerning some improvements to our cafeteria.
The green eco-friendly theme in the cafe is unique and refreshing. Besides, the prices are very reasonable even with the customized food options. Furthermore, the new Automatic vending machine with packaged food is helpful for students, who need food out of cafeteria working timings.
However, during the recent times, the food quality and taste have deteriorated. For instance, last week, we found a lizard in the food, yesterday we found plastic wrap while having our lunch. Furthermore, one of the taps in the handwash area is leaking, posing a threat to visitors safety.
Considering the food hygiene, I request you to cancel the contract for the current vendor and assign a new vendor. Besides, please get the water leakage fixed.
Yours faithfully,
Srini Kolam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... lunch. Furthermore, one of the taps in the handwash area is leaking, posing a threat to vis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8570069809 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8974326823 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102711628334 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295554983946 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435941161293 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612215504625 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527440082446 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 7.59969072165 132% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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