You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you
have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter
give details of your course and your arrival/departure date
explain your accommodation needs
ask for information about getting to and from the college
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I will be attending the Advanced Life Insurance course, being held from Tuesday 24th April until 27rd April, at the University of Hartford.
I will be arriving on the afternoon of Monday 23th and will be leaving on the morning of
Saturday the 28th of April, so I
will require a single room for this time. I would prefer my own bathroom, if this is
possible, but do not mind sharing if I have to; however, as I am wheelchair bound, the
room will have to be disability friendly. Could you please tell me how much this will cost
and how I should make a payment? Do you accept VISA?
As I do not know the area, I would also be grateful if you could provide some information
about getting to and from the University. Will I need to take public transport from the
station or is there a University bus service? Any information on what to see and do
in the area would also be greatly appreciated.
Thank you for your assistance. Alex Jones
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93370165746 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83117772144 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4210163355 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142551447964 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556034492814 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489602438844 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600877958235 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445657996013 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.