You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to
because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can move in
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT
need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr Srikanth,
As you know, I planned to shift to your apartment located at Northwood street coming September, but the movement has to be pushed by a month due to personal commitments.
Currently, my daughter is studying her 4th grade in Little Flower School, located near my current residence in York. I have planned the relocation based on her exam schedule, which is due next week. However, due to administrative reasons, the school has postponed her exams by three weeks. I believe moving now will increase her travel time to school, consequently impacting her academic focus.
Considering the above reason, I would like to relocate once she finished her exams, in the first week of October. As it is short notice, I would like to apologize and reassure you that this is not of my best interests and I am willing to pay the rent amount in full for the coming month.
I await your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Srini Kolam
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78881987578 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6875109624 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701863354037 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2897970454 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227431328029 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852032277242 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534977411876 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133014268188 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531176713004 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.