Dear John,
I just saw an email seeking nominations for the best employee of the year award. I would like to nominate Imran from our team as a candidate for this Award.
From quite a long time, I was wondering that their should be some reward for Imran as he has helped our company in saving 20,000$ within a shot span of time. According to our past reports, this is the biggest savings we have even done and same was also appreciated by our onshore client, Paul. Apart from this, Imran has been a great motivator for the entire team and is a one spot resolution for all of us. Even, I had learnt various professional traits from him with the help of which my performance has also improved.
I would also like to share with you that, Paul has helped various new joiners with growth path. He is a person who has a great sense of convincing power and one who know's, how to lead by example. I believe that, he has all the characteristics of an efficient employee and he truly deserve the award.
I look forward to an update from you regarding the same.
Thank you.
Raj (Team AOS )
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
... he has helped our company in saving 20,000$ within a shot span of time. According t...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'deserves'.
Suggestion: deserves
...s of an efficient employee and he truly deserve the award. I look forward to an upda...
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Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng the same. Thank you. Raj Team AOS
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44554455446 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37163332804 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608910891089 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4783441558 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193208392428 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072735747362 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608164541841 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121632937787 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858589880479 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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