Write a letter to your manager for the suggestion to open a cafeteria for staff in the company.
- Why it is needed
- What facilities should it includes
Dear Sir,
I am, Maulik B Patel, serving as a production engineer in your organization for more than 6 years writing this letter to draw your concern towards the facility of cafeteria that should be indeed in need at our company on behalf of my department.
As you are aware about the locality of our organization, it is hard to find nearby options for food whenever we need. Our company is expanding enormously in recent years and runs for 24 hours a day, employed new staff and most of them are travelling from other part of the city. Therefore, a canteen facility in our own premises makes a favourable situation for both company and its employees.
The cafeteria should include proper seating arrangement with spacious, enclosed and hygiene environment. The food should include all nutrients and minerals with proper safety and healthy standards to keep our employees healthier and happier and it should be served at an affordable or concessional price for all staff.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Maulik B Patel
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03977272727 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77053168473 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7494703371 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.875 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298358798954 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108353621851 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679494088544 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147562034898 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094455889113 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.