In recent years children have been given more freedom than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Children's development is considered as a toughest task for society and nations as they are the future of it. In current era, they are allowed to be freer as in comparison with past. Although the freedom given to them brings many positive aspects in their life such as independency with healthy and wealthy future, monitoring of them should be taken in consideration at some extent.
Firstly, the freedom makes children independent in every aspects of their life. Their independency on parents or others makes them capable, creative, innovative and efficient in their academic as well as other tasks. They become self-reliant and thus the confident and extrovert in every aspects. Relaxation from shrinking of their mind gives them the better exposure of learning and make them enough capable to broaden their view to world.
Secondly, strictness and interference in each and every tasks of their life doesn't help to generate more bright future for them. Relaxation makes them more confident, focused and alerted which will be resulted in better career prospective in a long run. Healthier the future generation, wealthier the country in each terms such as research, economy and so on.
On the other side, They ought to be ensured from the devils of society who might lead them towards the bad habits such as consumption of drugs, smoking, chewing tobacco and many more as they are immature to understand the consequences of the same. Therefore, their activities should be monitored at some extent in order to ensure their safety and security.
To conclude, children should be allowed being self-reliant and emotionally as well as physically stronger which can be acquired by providing a freedom to them. But assurance for their safety should be taken in consideration frequently to open up the greater rewards for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16835016835 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77440668824 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542087542088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.211360031 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.072542431777 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304194985837 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319113955804 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459547388214 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034949608062 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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