Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
With the advent of internet and eCommerce, every nation has become similar, as we are able to buy anything and everything across the globe. In my opinion, there are myriad of positive developments, but, never lose the uniqueness of a country, namely, culture and ethnicity.
On the one hand, advancement of the internet over the years have been skyrocketing and has witnessed expansion of trading in every nook and corner of the world. Furthermore, increase in transportation methods, eases shipping and is cost effective, enabling retailers witness profit thereby increasing sales. For example, we get all the spices, vegetables, and fruits from a native country across miles and feels like home. We get to eat an authentic dish at a restaurant, without compromising the native taste. Moreover, technology has also brought in, lots of knowledge spread across with respect to spread of information relating to smart living with a healthy lifestyle. Another example, moringa leaves are in trend all over, due to its medicinal values, although, it is one of the common ingredients in making curries in India.
On the other hand, getting anything at any place has serious shortcomings, as the local market loses to the global ones. To illustrate, the westernization in terms of clothing has slowly led to closure of many hand looms in India, namely the silk sarees, cotton dhoti’s have fallen in great numbers, because draping them is tedious than to wear a shirt and pant instead . Consequently, we are losing the traditional costumes to the western ones, even though, people wear them during special occasions and festivals only.
In conclusion, never should an advancement hamper the values of a country in terms of culture and tradition. Hence, by appreciating the merits the technology has brought in, we should also consider the demerits and not allow them damage the local market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20261437908 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86754494911 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.488452122 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0673234242645 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224878094141 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032695806384 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045018282955 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395207209928 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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