Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
These days, there is little room for doubt that exporting of goods is one of the most fast-growing industries in the world. However, its impact on culture remains a source of constant debates. This essay will elaborate on both positive and negative effects of export from multiple perspectives.
Firstly, from many points of view it would be evident that sending different kind of products to different countries could affect people’s lives positively. By exporting, a wide-range of countries can cover their economic and social gaps. USA, for instance, has developed companies that make tens of millions of modern gadgets every year and export certain parts of them to all around the world. People from any corner of the globe are able to purchase these modern devices, even though they are far away from each other. In the light of this fact, nobody can dispute the great advantage of available products over the world.
On the other hand, this globalization might also lead to elimination of different cultural ideals and values. People having access to the modern products are refusing traditional ones. Teenagers, for instance, in many Asian countries are used to wear the western clothes and listen to European music. It causes alteration of their culture as clothes and music play an important role to convey indigenous sides of a country. As well as this, because of above-mentioned modern gadgets, almost every child has access to the Internet where they can be easily misguided to inappropriate content.
Taking into account both sides of the issue, I am inclined to believe that capability of purchasing the same goods from anywhere in the world is more advantageous and could help in more convenient life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for instance, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7061919138 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.784812749 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214944597643 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587851128607 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453781865302 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117702771668 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418048387322 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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