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write a letter to your teacher explaining sudden decision of leaving the course and returning home country.express thankswhy you have to leavewhat part of the course you enjoyed most?

Essay topics: write a letter to your teacher explaining sudden decision of leaving the course and returning home country.
express thanks
why you have to leave
what part of the course you enjoyed most?

Saira Faiz's picture

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inform you about my leaving the course on sudden notice in order to go back my home in Pakistan to finish some urgent tasks at my workplace and to support my parents during their illness. I want to thank you for all of your incredible efforts to make this course invaluable for us.
My reason for leaving is an issue at my work place to support a client. My company did a project for a Turkish company to make financial model, feasibility study, financial statements and regulatory accounts. However, client is facing technical issues while converting project into the process. Therefore, my boss urged me to go turkey and sort out the problem on urgent basis, so that we would not face any legal issues. In addition to this, my father has gotten extremely sick and want me to spend time with him.
I loved every day of the course offered by one of the top-notch Universities in the world. This course was selected by me to excel in my professional life, getting new skills and perspective about the world. Your way of teaching is incredible, asking questions on a daily basis from last lectures to revise it, taking test on a regular basis, and giving notes which contain a plethora of information.
i hope to take this course again one day.

yours sincerely,
SAIRA

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ch contain a plethora of information. i hope to take this course again one day....
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ch contain a plethora of information. i hope to take this course again one day....
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... to take this course again one day. yours sincerely, SAIRA
^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n one day. yours sincerely, SAIRA
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58295404155 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645021645022 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.669207258 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4166666667 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136944820944 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498432547334 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497972731744 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915482538257 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691943618625 0.0580467560999 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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