Writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle.
• When you started to use bicycle to go to work
• What the problem is
• Suggesting the solution of the problem.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing this letter regarding the bicycle parking space nuisance around our building area. I have started using a bicycle in the last two years as my doctor suggested losing weight. The parking space issue has been a problematic ever since I started using bicycle as many residents are adhere to cars or bikes. There is no enough space allocated for bicycle. Also, my office is just 3 miles away from the building and I feel so comfortable in using bicycle.
I had to come late from office on weekdays and it’s difficult to find parking space around our building. Sometimes, I had to park my bicycle outside our building and it’s not safe to do as there is a chance of theft. I wanted to encourage many of our residents to use bicycle as it reduces the pollution and in return it helps them to stay fit. We have many modes of transports but using bicycle reminds me of my childhood days as we used to go to school in a bicycle with a group of friends. I want to set an example in our neighborhood area for many youngsters.
To solve this problem, I have a suggestion of using the empty space beneath the stair case or allocate a space of around hundred square feet especially for bicycle parking. This could solve the parking space issue and makes me feel comfortable in parking my bicycle inside the building. Hope you understand and help me to resolve this issue as early as possible
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Arumoh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'adhered'.
Suggestion: adhered
...ted using bicycle as many residents are adhere to cars or bikes. There is no enough sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66541353383 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53026510588 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537593984962 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0919981469 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250414930005 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829291817253 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467260078668 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132633149872 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694431470148 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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