Yesterday you lost your student identification card. You need to get discounts on public transport and for the cinema, and to use the college library. Even more importantly, you need it as proof of identity to withdraw money at bank.
Write to the Director of Student Services explaining the situation and requesting a new card as soon as possible
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that my identification card has been misplaced yesterday. The commutations to and from college became expensive as a result because I am unable to take discounts on the rides. Furthermore, this card is the only way by which my identity can be established.
Let me explain to you that the importance of this card is realized when it was lost as wherever I go, I must present it. Earlier, it was always hanged around my neck and the entry into the library, sports facilities and other amenities of college were at a blink of an eye, but now I cannot go to the library because of which my studies could be disturbed. In addition to college facilities, in many private entertainment places like cinema, the production of the card is essential to avail 40% discount.
More importantly, the same card was being used to withdraw money from the bank account and without it soon I will run out of money and cannot even travel to the college. Therefore, I request you to issue a new identity card on an urgent basis so that I can avail all the benefits and can get money for my routine expenses.
Thank you in anticipation
Yours faithfully,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61502347418 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77583524399 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62441314554 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4467242115 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298775906075 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113240552346 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052523621282 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174185434081 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416874002605 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.