Brief about yourself

Essay topics:

Brief about yourself

Dear Sir/Madam,
I hereby apply for the subject vacant position as advertised.
WHAT I HAVE TO OFFER:
1. Education: Qualified CPA (US), CFA-Leve-II Candidate, ACMA, M. Com and B. Com - strong research and study background in accounting & finance
2. Sectors served: I have experience in F&B Retail, Facilities Management & Real Estate Development, Plastic Manufacturing, Transportation & logistics and Trading business setups
3. Experience: 8+ years of diversified experience in analyses, accounting, market research, finance, investments, budgeting, pricing, costing, planning and financial reporting, LCs, export bill negotiations, etc
4. Technical Expertise: GAAP, IFRS, Corporate Laws, Financial Analysis, Capital Budgeting, Management Reporting & preparation of financial statements (i.e., Balance Sheet, Income Statement, Cash Flow Statements, Statement of Changes in Equity, annexed schedules & reconciliations), Budgeting, Forecasting, and Analysis
5. Skills: Analytical, problem-solving, leadership, communication skills. A quick learner and able to adapt new trends
6. IT knowledge: Bloomberg Terminal, SAP-B1, ERP - Oracle-based software (AP, AR, FA, GL and Inventory modules). I can also work on Peachtree, QuickBooks, and Tally. Well versed with MS Office (Word, Advanced Excel - financial modeling & formulas, PowerPoint and e-mail applications).
7. Language competency: Fluent in English with excellent communication and presentation skills Please find my resume enclosed herewith, should you wish to view my profile in detail.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

Atta ur Rahman
+971 50 702 5153

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

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... background in accounting & finance 2. Sectors served: I have experience in F&B...
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...gistics and Trading business setups 3. Experience: 8+ years of diversified expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.43891402715 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4758714619 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.850678733032 0.561755894193 151% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 80.8996050284 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8125 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.48 12.4159519038 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.64 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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