You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular photo. In your letter,
- Tell him/her about the problem with your photos
- Say which photo you would like him/her to send you
- Explain why you need this photo.
Dear Mohammad,
I’m just writing to say thank you for the offer to join you on your holiday. I was over the moon when received your letter of invitation.
Sadly, when we went to the Taj Mahal castle, I took all the pictures with my cell phone. Because the camera’s battery died out moments before we arrived, and unfortunately, the phone memory was faulty, and I didn’t know that. So, the photos of the Taj Mahal were not saved.
Could you do me a favor, and send me any photo of the underground museum. Specifically, the part which was about the history of the castle. I hope you’ve taken some pictures of that area.
The reason why I asking you to send me those photos is my older sister. She is studying history at university, and writing an essay about the history of India. She would be grateful if you could find and send any photos for her.
Take care,
Ali
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ictures of that area. The reason why I asking you to send me those photos is m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52173913043 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35660064632 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645962732919 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.287250734 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6666666667 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300383891493 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093402235435 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719675561641 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173796782306 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891375273515 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.