You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:Give details of your visit to the restaurantExplain the reason f

Dear Sir,

I am writing to appreciate your service and the meal offered to us recently.I visited last Sunday with my friends for a dinner to celebrate my birth anniversary at around 7 pm. I thoroughly got carried away by the dishes and the hospitality.

The occasion was my birthday, as mentioned earlier. I haven't celebrated any memorable occasions from the past five years. So, this year, my friends planned to organize a get-together on my birthday. Coincidentally, one of my friends received a promotion in his job, which added further to the festive mode. I feel delighted I selected your restaurant.

Foremost, I noticed the hospitality of your staff was extremely gracious. They offered us a warm welcome with a lemon drink, which provoked our appetite. Next, the range of dishes you have was immense, and we couldn't choose one, as all of them were my favorites. On top of that, I found some food toothsome, especially the shrimp pizza and the crispy chicken wings. Not to mention, the mackerel curry which we loved the most.

I wholeheartedly appreciate your service and hope to visit again soon. Keep up the good work.

Best regards,
Prasanth G

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ice and the meal offered to us recently.I visited last Sunday with my friends for...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te my birth anniversary at around 7 pm. I thoroughly got carried away by the dish...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...as my birthday, as mentioned earlier. I havent celebrated any memorable occasions from...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ite. Next, the range of dishes you have was immense, and we couldnt choose one, as ...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... of dishes you have was immense, and we couldnt choose one, as all of them were my favo...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
incidentally, so, i feel, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94416243655 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8865802587 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690355329949 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2697791636 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1333333333 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154932069441 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408213001191 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423466568119 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923244859716 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288627207663 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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