You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter
Explain when and why you are moving
Give your preference for the location of the accommodation
Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to request information about rental flats in New York City. I am moving or relocating to New York on August 1st because I have received a job offer from a highly-esteemed multi-national company in the Bay area. I will be joining work on August 11th. My family and I would like to arrive there 10 days in advance as we need a few days to get adjusted to our new home and surroundings.
I prefer to rent a house located at a distance of 15KM to 20KM from the Bay area. It should be near either a metro station or a bus stand so that the daily commute will be easier for my husband and I. Having a gym and joggers park in our locality will be an added advantage for us.
As for the flat, it should have 2 bedrooms with attached bathrooms, a kitchen and a living room. It should preferably be in a five storey apartment building. A spacious living area is more preferable with a balcony attached to it.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Carol Langland
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...multi-national company in the Bay area. I will be joining work on August 11th. My...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49743589744 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73806777156 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0485764101 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0833333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167050061343 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594192480157 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610985333378 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102131867176 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754350810106 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.