Dear Sir/Madam,
I was recently a guest at your hotel in Cuba,where my family and I had a very pleasant stay.Unfortunately upon my return home I have that I had left my laptop in my room at hotel,and so I am writing to ask you to please ship it to me.
The laptop is 15 inch Dell with silver logo on the cover and a sticker of Avengers on bottom right hand corner of the keyboard.The keyboard itself has worn off with some of the letters missing.It should be easy to identify.
I am a university researcher and although on vacation,I had to work on major project.I did not have the opportunity to upload this vital work to the cloud and thereby have a back up,so I genuinely need to recover the laptop as soon as possible.
Could you please ship it to me by express mail? I will immediately transfer the full cost to your bank account.Please let me know you have laptop and can send it as well as the banking details. I appreciate your assistance in this matter.
Your Sincerely,
Prajakta.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , where
...s recently a guest at your hotel in Cuba,where my family and I had a very pleasant sta...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...y family and I had a very pleasant stay.Unfortunately upon my return home I have that I had l...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...I had left my laptop in my room at hotel,and so I am writing to ask you to please sh...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it to me. The laptop is 15 inch Dell with silver logo on the cover and a stic...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ottom right hand corner of the keyboard.The keyboard itself has worn off with some ...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...d.The keyboard itself has worn off with some of the letters missing.It should be easy to id...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...rn off with some of the letters missing.It should be easy to identify. I am a u...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...sity researcher and although on vacation,I had to work on major project.I did not ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...vacation,I had to work on major project.I did not have the opportunity to upload ...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to upload this vital work to the cloud and thereby have a back up,so I genuinel...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...to the cloud and thereby have a back up,so I genuinely need to recover the laptop ...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...sfer the full cost to your bank account.Please let me know you have laptop and can sen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47282608696 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83805471831 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9100742243 44.8134815571 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162839648414 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740520909404 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292136672774 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781604138364 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426664582431 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.