You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment.
I your letter:
- give details of the things that were unsatisfactory
- explain the reactions of the members of your family
- ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the apartment that I have rented recently.
I rented an apartment for your agency last month. Unfortunately, I was not a well-equipped apartment despite your recommendation. As you know, the weather is so scorching in this season and air conditioner is one of the most significant requirments; but when we have arrived in that place, we found the air conditioner did not work. We were suffering from that situation especially my three year old son. As well as this, after having a long journey, my husband wanted to take a shower, but water was not cold enough and it caused him to become irritated. As a consequence, we left apartment very soon as we failed to have memorable holiday. I am entitled to request that you could possibly check your apartment's facilities as soon as possible and refund my money for that inconvenience situation.
I would deeply appreciate if you could give me a prompt reply at the earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Hamed Karimi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 677, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...iday. I am entitled to request that you could possibly check your apartments facilities as soo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15803944024 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6528951825 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269921550344 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1058495329 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628829890902 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151958634979 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775905348859 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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