On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- describe the item you lost
- explain how you lost it
- tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I have recently lost my necklace on the latest travel I purchased from your company.
Last week when I was on the holiday, I have unfortunately noticed that I lost my necklace. In order to having a travel insurance, I hope I would find it very soon. The necklace, which is made of gold and weighs fifteen grams, has been lost on my hotel, but I did not remember where it should be fallen. After having played tennis at the tennis court, I found that I missed it. As a result, I came back hotel immediately and made a phone call to police to report it. Although I reported the situation in detail, they did not do anything since now. So, I am entitled to request that you pursue this issue due to the responsibility you have concerning my travel's insurance.
I once again would appreciate if you could possibly send me a reply to explain a practical solution as the earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Ahmad Pouei
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
... I once again would appreciate if you could possibly send me a reply to explain a practical ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57386363636 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70926226388 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670454545455 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9455611578 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270838488537 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898121812437 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812849111696 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191762790236 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921763785827 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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