Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education. Why do people do this and would/will you consider doing this yourself?
The recent decades have witnessed a rise in the number of people who tend to pursue their academic ambitions in abroad. It seems, this phenomenon may originate from less domestic occupational prospects they have in their hometowns. Also if I had a change to study abroad, I would absolutely seize the chance.
One possible reason of this issue that is worth-mentioning is to gain job opportunities. By studying in abroad colleges, young people would be able to take advantage of those professional skills to find well-paying jobs. It means that most of people have already experienced lacks of facilities which are provided by domestic universities; these facilities and equipment, such as laboratories, are sometimes outdated especially in developing countries. In addition, job opportunity for domestically graduated students is not considerable, so it leads those people to be unemployed for a long period.
In my opinion, studying abroad enables youngsters to transform to versatile experts, and they would become well-experienced. To clarify, we can assimilate a wide range of essential experience related to our major which can be beneficial for our career in the future. Obtaining up-to-date academic achievements can help each student to make their self-esteem and fortune. To illustrate, studying in an American first-grade university has always been as a dream of people from undeveloped countries, as those universities provide a cascade of modern facilities and useful amenities for students.
To conclude, it is true that people are going to travel to foreign countries for educating purposes and this trend is increasing on a daily basis, but I think it could not only be positive but it also could enhance people's aptitudes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...prospects they have in their hometowns. Also if I had a change to study abroad, I wo...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...to find well-paying jobs. It means that most of people have already experienced lacks of facil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41391941392 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2463554663 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6863755317 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22234868632 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745240592936 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376669790387 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13527887218 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217896705578 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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