You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to former teacher.In your lettergive details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your could put in the reference.

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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to former teacher.
In your letter
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your could put in the reference.

Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. it has been a while since we last met. I am writing this letter to ask a letter of reference from your side as I need to submit to for my job application.

The job I am applying for is for a Senior Sourcing Specialist with Foxcom and is based in Singapore. Foxcom is a multinational company which manufactures electronic products headquartered in Denmark. The role demands to handle purchase related requests from customers based in South-East Asia. I believe this is a golden opportunity for me as it will not only help me acquire new skills but also provide international exposure which will further enhance my career growth.

As mentioned above the letter of reference serves as a mandatory recommendation document for applying for this role, so I request you to send a hard copy of a letter of reference by email mentioning my conduct and performance during my college tenure followed by email and college stamp.

I look forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely,
Vinshu

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. it has been a while since we last met. I a...
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Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iate response. Yours sincerely, Vinshu
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93714285714 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.961444766 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645714285714 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4047773375 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198723752858 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733946829578 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735483175248 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117775671364 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565304986702 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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