You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to former teacher.
In your letter
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your could put in the reference.
Dear Ms Lilly,
I am Harry singh, student of MTech computer science, 2014 batch. My enrollment id is CS0288614. I am writing this letter to request a letter of reference from you, which I need for my new job.
you will be proud to read that after my studies, I got enrolled with renowned IT company as a Software developer and fortunately, I have got the superior opportunity to work with google. I got selected by google last month during international job fair held in Delhi. after going through rigorous six months training, I would be joining next month as a senior developer.
Working with google organization would be like a dream come true situation for me. This job would not only expand my experience but also give me an opportunity to work with different project clients around the globe. In few years, if my performance would be noteworthy, I could get a chance to work in USA. Hence this job means a lot to me.
It would be appreciated, if you could provide the details of my education such as my admission criteria that includes my bachelor's studies details, my master's degree credit scores and the six month college internship.
I will be grateful to you.
Yours sincerely
harry singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms Lilly, I am Harry singh, student of MTech compu...
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Suggestion: You
...m you, which I need for my new job. you will be proud to read that after my stu...
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Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...tudies, I got enrolled with renowned IT company as a Software developer and fortunately...
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Suggestion: After
...g international job fair held in Delhi. after going through rigorous six months train...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...y, I could get a chance to work in USA. Hence this job means a lot to me. It woul...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and the six month college internship. I will be grateful to you. Yours sinc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l be grateful to you. Yours sincerely harry singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75829383886 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72929002784 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649289099526 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0228854711 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2307692308 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108011806669 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438379483696 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558375407634 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605167459464 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417670642329 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.