You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to former teacher.
In your letter
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your could put in the reference.
Dear sir,
I hope my letter finds you well.
I am writing to ask if you would kindly write me a reference letter for a job application. The job i am applying for is in the tourism industry, more specifically, i expect to give surfing lessons to tourists in Bali.
Let me explain in more detail. I almost have done with the job formalities except the requested document. if you remember, i was the top performer throughout my school days and i also participated in district level football tournament. Beside this i was the outsmart speaker for portuguese and German and i am still part of the holy charitable trust. could you please mentioned my amicable and hardworking personality along with my educational achievements? if you could possibly mention my ability with foreign languages,that would be excellent.
would you be able to deliver this letter by end of this week as i have a very tight deadline and the job will begin less than a week.
hoping for an immediate response.
Yours faithfully,
Kushal Rana
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir, I hope my letter finds you well. I am ...
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...e letter for a job application. The job i am applying for is in the tourism indus...
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...he tourism industry, more specifically, i expect to give surfing lessons to touri...
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...ve surfing lessons to tourists in Bali. Let me explain in more detail. I almost ...
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...malities except the requested document. if you remember, i was the top performer t...
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...he requested document. if you remember, i was the top performer throughout my sch...
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Suggestion: I
... level football tournament. Beside this i was the outsmart speaker for portuguese...
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... football tournament. Beside this i was the outsmart speaker for portuguese and German and i...
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...t speaker for portuguese and German and i am still part of the holy charitable tr...
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...till part of the holy charitable trust. could you please mentioned my amicable and ha...
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Suggestion: If
...long with my educational achievements? if you could possibly mention my ability w...
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...th my educational achievements? if you could possibly mention my ability with foreign languag...
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...ention my ability with foreign languages,that would be excellent. would you be a...
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...eign languages,that would be excellent. would you be able to deliver this letter...
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...languages,that would be excellent. would you be able to deliver this letter by e...
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...nd the job will begin less than a week. hoping for an immediate response. Yo...
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Suggestion: Hoping
... job will begin less than a week. hoping for an immediate response. Yours fa...
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...mmediate response. Yours faithfully, Kushal Rana
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95580508043 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3445635724 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.25 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182679490612 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642042206865 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340701887432 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946810520704 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360060686745 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.