A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Undoubtedly, a huge section of our society love to take part in dangerous sports. this essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and put forward several solutions for this issue.
The main reason is that they get thrill out of it. they find it entertaining and refreshing. they consider it as the best way to keep their self stay away from the day to day stress. they get a sense of satisfaction when they come face to face with fear while bungee jumping and rock climbing.Many of them believe that it gives them courage to face their real life challenges.
Another reason is that, people get fame and money by taking part in risky sports. when they climb any building or mountain, they make headlines in newspapers, in turn they get unprecedented fame. Many companies offer them a huge sum of money to endorse their products and services. For instance, Adidas has chosen Mr. Mohit as their brand ambassador due to his amazing climbing skills.
In my opinion, these sports should be performed in strict supervision and there shoud be proper law in place so that such sports can not be organised illegally. some people have views that these sports should be banned but i believe, prohibited fruits always taste better. If we impose ban on risky sports, then people will start performing them in hiding which further will increase the chances of fatal injuries.
In conclusion, people mainly take part in unsafe sports for fun, for money and for fame. However such sports should be performed after enough training from licensed companies and under some supervisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93308550186 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50756652662 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635687732342 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9902911574 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101031105775 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325173233141 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330893176809 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541676756657 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376400005781 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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