Nowadays, internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development.
it is undeniable fact that technological advancement has made significant changes in the lives of common people. it is not only helpful to simplify our way of living but at the same time it provides us immense opportunities to become popular. this essay will discuss the pros and cons of this change.
In the past one decade, there has been a tremendous transformation in the popularity of internet and media influences such as TV. there are thousands of instances wherein a person from economically deprived section has got fame by his creativity or special achievements . Furthermore, it is acceptable fact that fame always comes with wealth. In my opinion ,there must not be any opposition if a common person is getting recognition because it will not only improve the financial position of that person, but will also help his region to get popularity. In addition to this ,it is a common trend in india that whenever a person from backward area get fame, he definitely takes initiative for the development of his area.
Secondly, if a common person get fame through any reality show or by any other means of media, it will motivate thousands of people to achieve the same success and they will be able to get rid from the myth that only powerful section of society can get success. Besides, if the people from common background gets fame and wealth then each section of society will move towards prosperity.
In conclusion, in my opinion, there are multiple advantages if a normal person get fame as it will not only help him to grow but side by side the entire section of people get confidence to do something different in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81338028169 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77065482558 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4068848356 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0619136362378 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280495917373 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026112660151 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417516168364 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180206862254 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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