Nowadays, internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. is this a positive or negative development ?
it is undeniable fact that internet and television has given numerous moments to common people to become popular . it not only entertain us but at the same time it provides us immense opportunities to earn renown. this essay will discuss the pros and cons of this change.
In the past one decade, there has been a tremendous transformation in the popularity of internet and media influences such as TV. it can be easily seen that every person wants to take part in the concerts and shows, organised by a media house or a social media group. there are thousands of instances wherein a person from economically deprived section has got fame by his creativity or special achievements . For example, Mr nawazudin was from a very poor family but now he has become a movie celebrity. Furthermore, it is acceptable fact that fame always comes with wealth. In my opinion ,there must not be any opposition if a common person is getting recognition because it will not only improve the financial position of that person, but will also help his region to get popularity. In addition to this ,it is a common trend in india that whenever a person from backward area get fame, he definitely takes initiative for the development of his area.
Secondly, if a common man get fame through any reality show or by any other means of media, it will motivate many people to achieve the same success and they will be able to get rid from the myth that only powerful section of society can get success. Besides, if the people from common background gets fame and wealth then each section of society will move towards prosperity.
In conclusion, in my opinion, there are multiple advantages if a normal person get fame as it will not only help him to grow but side by side the entire section of people get confidence to do something different in their lives. and cons of this change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71951219512 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64541115588 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545731707317 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3018082091 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110539001872 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048776004151 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645757668884 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082388801623 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645727554174 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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