Nowadays, internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. is this a positive or negative development ?
it is undeniable fact that internet and television has given numerous moments to common people to become popular . it not only entertain us but at the same time it provides us immense opportunities to earn renown. this essay will discuss the pros and cons of this change.
In the past one decade, there has been a tremendous transformation in the popularity of internet and media influences such as TV. it can be easily seen that every person wants to take part in the concerts and shows, organised by a media house or a social media group. there are thousands of instances wherein a person from economically deprived section has got fame by his creativity or special achievements . For example, Mr nawazudin was from a very poor family but now he has become a movie celebrity. Furthermore, it is acceptable fact that reputation always comes with wealth. In my opinion ,there must not be any opposition if a common person is getting recognition because it will not only improve the financial position of that person, but will also help his region to get prestige. In addition to this ,it is a common trend in india that whenever a person from backward area get position, he definitely takes initiative for the development of his area.
Secondly, if a common man get fame through any reality show or by any other means of media, it will motivate many people to meet the same success and they will be able to get rid from the myth that only powerful section of society can get accomplishment. Besides, if the people from common background gets fame and wealth then each section of public will move towards prosperity.
In conclusion, in my opinion, there are multiple advantages if a regular person get fame as it will not only help him to grow but side by side the entire section of people get confidence to do something different in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75541795666 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72299174139 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9072743138 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107045122265 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458692750079 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660903266249 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767689114894 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681924074102 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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