Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works of art, and not show the culture or artworks from other countries. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Display of art work from foreign countries along with the local are work has become a controversial topic and people can be seen debating its positive and negative impacts. some people belive that international are work msut be banned in domestic art centres, while some other believe that there is nothing wrong in this. In my opinion there must not be any restriction on artistic creation as it is the most common way to bring the people together.
In current situation all the countries across the globe are working like a single unit and they have become dependant on each other for their social and economic development. In these circumstances we can not put limitation on artistry as it can have a worse impact on the cross county cultural communication.
art is the most common way to strengthen the relationship amount different nations, it gives opportunities to know each other. A recent study has indicated that better art and cultural communication among regions enhance the trust and helpful to meet prosperity.
On the other, there is nothing wrong if a state body emphasises more on the local artistic creation as it's there moral responsibility. it is also helpful in employment generation. Secondly, it will help the region to mark its presence on global map.
In conclusion, it's totally absurd to ban the show of international art work as it is not only harmful for the external artists but also can limit the scope of learning to domestic art workers. However, the authorities can take various initiative to promote the showcase of local work and can help them to stay in competition.
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also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07011070111 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86749821086 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8018529719 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205371810648 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685247975389 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545829374688 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106521366927 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475758400521 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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